Essay 3 Reflection

1. What did you learn about the research process that was new to you? Of all the types of sources you found, from popular to scholarly to primary, which was most fruitful or interesting? For me the whole research process was new. I have never really done one before this. I found it to be very difficult, especially the formatting of the essay. I found my popular source to be most interesting, I think you will too! 
2. What did you learn about the writing process of your partner in the Peer Draft workshop? How did their process and the way they put their ideas together differ from yours? (Even if you had no draft yet, how did your discussion with the other person teach you something? My peer did not have a draft yet, but it was interesting to discuss how she was going to structure her essay. As it always is. It gave me ideas and helped me to form mine as well. She was a lot more organized than I was in the beginning. 
3. What is one part of your essay you are unsure of? What would you like specific feedback from Professor Dan on, if anything? I am unsure about the entire thing if I am being completely honest. More specifically I am unsure about my conclusion, I had no idea how to end on a good and strong note. 

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